Monday, July 03, 2006

Empty Within

Sitting here all alone
Inside these four walls
Drowned in silence
I take comfort in solitude

Thoughts elude me
I know not how I feel
the voices in my head
died along with me

I've become amused
I've become blind
I've become illiterate
to all my emotions

I embrace reality
with a clouded heart
that feels no love
with an open wound
that hurts no more

Hope, love, loneliness and pain
don't mean a thing anymore
as I take a step towards
a dark and uncertain future..!!

4 comments:

Ratish Mani said...

It's like words of many unspoken minds !

Very well put, in a few simple words, in the form of a poem.

Reality ! It's so flawed, the design, it's not right, could have been better..

Reality !!!

Anonymous said...

Hey nams believe me im not lying the poems uve written are awesome and im not lying!the first one that uve written in the best...its cool man...its something that i can relate to...Keep it !! long way to go!! Yo man!

rota said...

thats a nice one all the poems have one emotion which its stongest of all ... this one was a nice read

batt said...

nice was of putting that inside emptiness out :-).... i wonder, lots of ur poems reflect the same angst/confusions/.. within me too!.